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Hymn For Her

I wanted to write a hymn for her. A poem that sings her gentle songs. Prose that justifies and ignites her eloquence. I've endeavored to carefully piece together the 26 letters of the alphabet. Rearranging these slices and strokes to convey my verdadero - my vrai for her. But I can't. For her poetic alphabet leaves me on tenterhooks - breathless and bedazzled. She is a treasure. A perfectly cut diamond. And when I close my eyes tonight, I will inhale her enchanting prose. For I know her beautiful heart will always share a soothing sonnet - a whimsical poem or perhaps a magical hymn... from her to us for him for me.

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Date: 6/4/2015 9:59:00 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
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Date: 3/9/2011 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals John. Love Carol
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:30:00 PM
Congrats John on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest.. threes a charm luv..
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Date: 2/5/2011 1:06:00 PM
This is indeed a hymn, John...sweet and beautiful...Isn't it funny how poetry can affect us sooooo? Another fav. Always. Annalise
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Date: 12/7/2010 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations John on your amazing poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 6:24:00 AM
This is really nice John, I like this one... Lucky babes, she is, I bet.... rock on bro...love you!
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Date: 11/5/2010 9:01:00 AM
Indeed you have succeeded in writing your hymn for her....without needing to say even one letter of her name.......how could she not know when she reads this exquisite poem, that it is meant for her? Just lovely John....this is a beauty that will swell her heart! :) So nice to read your poetry again!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:11:00 AM
You have expressed nice sentiment on Hyman for her, my friend. enjoyed it, john
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Date: 11/5/2010 7:43:00 AM
that was lovely John
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Date: 11/5/2010 7:37:00 AM
Excellent John.. this free verse is wonderful to read and absorb the superb lines u have penned so well my friend.. expressive and impressive as well.. enjoy a happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 11/5/2010 3:39:00 AM
this is so engaging and mellow.. the paths of tender words curving and bending with the pacing of your expressions... really impressive, john.. thanks for sharing warmest, nette
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