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While a lattice of gold asters sheds its dangled petals, I cringe against the intrusion from rainfall's unforgiving wind. Through night's hush, moist blooms graze my arms scenting my quietude. ............... Andrea Dietrich’s Glorious Sijo Fields Visual No.5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/15/2015 10:50:00 PM
NETTE, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:00:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on this beautiful descriptive win. 7 Blessings
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Date: 2/11/2015 1:28:00 AM
Ah that's a creative masterpiece my dear friend Nette! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/10/2015 8:10:00 AM
This is glorious, filled with lush images. You shine in this form.
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Date: 2/8/2015 5:27:00 PM
Way to go with this winner..Congrats on the gold..Sara
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Date: 2/8/2015 2:11:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/8/2015 10:56:00 AM
For me I would have placed it higher a truly beautiful poem..congratulations
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Date: 2/8/2015 10:17:00 AM
Oh my goodness.......this beauty would rate higher with me..., the melancholy quality makes me cringe against any intrusion of the moments while reading. A big congratulations, Nette!
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Date: 2/8/2015 8:18:00 AM
Still Gorgeous, congratulations!
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Date: 2/8/2015 5:13:00 AM
Ahh you meld with the blossoms in this perfect Sijo Nette. Big congts on your win!
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Date: 2/8/2015 4:34:00 AM
Nette, there seems to be a touch of sadness in your Sijo that lets you to be an inalienable part of the field you describe. Congrats for fine win.
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Date: 2/8/2015 4:14:00 AM
Love the honeyed mellow gentleness that seeps from these words, Nette. Perfect ending line. #7 Congrats on a much deserved win. // paul
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Date: 2/8/2015 12:47:00 AM
I do believe YOU were the only one to choose THIS picture, Nette. As always, your imagery is stunning. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 2/7/2015 4:39:00 AM
A lovely Sijo by you Nette!
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Date: 2/5/2015 8:17:00 PM
beautiful imaginary nette excellent pen dear pal
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Date: 2/5/2015 4:47:00 AM
O glorious nette...love
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Date: 2/4/2015 8:34:00 AM
Gorgeous Nette!
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Date: 2/3/2015 11:53:00 PM
Dear Nette, This poem is simply amazing..... Kudos on writing a great poem!
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Date: 2/2/2015 10:06:00 PM
Asters anointing the soft skin of a poetess . . . sweet is the image. 7
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Date: 2/2/2015 6:55:00 PM
This sijo.. is.. glorious my poetic friend..your last line is perfect to tie it all together
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Date: 2/2/2015 5:52:00 PM
Very beautiful and serene...huggs Tim
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Date: 2/2/2015 2:11:00 PM
Such brilliant imagery Nette - your pen is golden my friend:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:59:00 PM
Lovely write Nette.. Rich with imagery..
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:39:00 PM
- Beautiful - I wish you best of luck in contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:12:00 PM
Awesome way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner..Broken hearts and earthquakes make for a weepy work thanks for reading. Sara
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