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Hush Now, Baby, Hush- Rated E

Hush now, baby, hush The time to speak has passed Draw in closer, love, to me Let me feel you now at last Hush now, baby, hush Move in and touch my lips Let your words be in your kiss For honey from them drips Hush now, baby, hush Give your hands voice to speak Can’t you sense, my darling man That your presence makes me weak Hush now, baby, hush Let your body love convey This message is well received My own knows just what to say Hush now….baby….h…u…s…h… I am trembling to the core Let my breathlessness and moans Be my plea to ask for more ...........Hushhhhh............ Eileen Manassian Ghali WHAT IS RATED E? Rated EILEEN! ;) Entertaining.....HOPEFULLY! Sensual...MY way!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/18/2014 8:44:00 AM

Small typo, change be to by. I don't know how I missed that the last time. I must have been distracted by the ecstasy.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2014 3:47:00 PM

;0)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/18/2014 12:44:00 PM

HA HA HA HA! Yes, I did notice that, Richard....and Yes, I knew what you meant! ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2014 9:23:00 AM

Oops I reversed my words but you knew what I meant*lol*.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/18/2014 8:51:00 AM

Richard....thanks for having my best interest at heart...You have no idea what it means to me. I made the change....Thanks for visiting....warms my heart ..

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 11/13/2013 11:47:00 AM

The Queen of Passion is at it again. Sensual, as only you could do it, girlfriend. A killer line "Give your hands voice to speak". You do it with passion and you do it well, my friend. Hugs and kisses Licia XOXOXOXOX

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/13/2013 11:59:00 AM

Thanks, sweetie pie! Yes.....sometimes hands and lips can speak more eloquently than a thousand words.... How you been, girlfriend? HUGSSSSS!!!!

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/13/2013 9:40:00 AM

E for Eros' splendor. "Hush", "Drips", "Core"...amen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/13/2013 12:00:00 PM

YES EROS! Amazing....full of splendor...love which words spoke to you! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/12/2013 8:44:00 AM

E rated is good. E for ecstasy!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/13/2013 12:01:00 PM

:) Yes....and why not? Thanks, Richard!

Richard D Seal

Date: 11/11/2013 2:20:00 PM

You should be X rated for some of your writes my little Desert Orchid and this is no exception. huuuush hot lol Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/12/2013 5:40:00 AM

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..........Mr Seal. Now you hush with this whole X rated business. Seriously, it is your mind that takes the poem to that level....Ok...no denying it. Yes, I do write sensual poetry....I am a sensual person....and I won't apologize for any of it! ;) There we go...all better? Thanks for the visit, Mr Seal...Always...a pleasure...even when you tease!

Joseph Matose

Date: 11/11/2013 12:18:00 PM

Ha ha ha ha! This quatrain kicked me so hard. You're a master in this kind of stuff. What a creative genius you are. I enjoyed this piece up to the core and it h-u-s-h-e-d and trembled me (joke). Thanks, Friend. JM

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/12/2013 5:42:00 AM

Well, my dear Joseph. Were it not for everything that follows that HA HA HA HA HA...I would not know how to respond to this post of yours! I take it you are impressed and do not really find it THAT humorous. Humor when someone is trying to be provocative is...what shall I say...not the desired response? ;) Thanks for the visit. :) I did make changes so that it wouldn't be as....earthshaking! ;) That last line had a rewrite on it so it is more....kosher.