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Human sandcastles

we build ourselves up
into what we want to be...
life's tide erodes us

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  1. Date: 8/3/2011 5:34:00 AM
    One of the best short poems I have read, brilliant write jim, Ryan.

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 3:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Jim. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 9:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Jim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 8:43:00 PM
    Congrats Jim on your featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with us all with luv..

  1. Date: 12/10/2010 5:31:00 PM
    The ever present ebbing tide of life~NICE MISTER!!!!!~Rick

  1. Date: 12/7/2010 3:04:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this great psychological approach..Sara

  1. Date: 12/7/2010 5:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Jim in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 9:47:00 PM
    VERY good message in this one. Congratulations, Jim!

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 3:24:00 PM
    Congrats Jim on your big win in Irmas' contest with this super entry .. enjoy your top spot tonight with luv..

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 11:55:00 AM
    congratulations Jim on the placement,

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 10:37:00 AM
    Congratulations Jim on winning 3rd place-kashinath

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 8:10:00 AM
    congratulations Jim on your 3ard place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 2:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Jim

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 11:09:00 PM
    love this Jim, so profound, Congrats. Harry

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 9:25:00 PM
    Jim~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 8:49:00 AM
    Amazing. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jim and wish you the best in the contest if you enter it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 6:09:00 PM
    wee! I love, it and good luck,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 3:44:00 PM
    Nice write write on humanb sandcastles with nice images, Jim

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 1:03:00 PM
    This is a wonderuful Haiku, Jim. And if you're talking about superficial stuff, yes, life does erode..not the real stuff that you are made of. Your inner strength, your heart and soul, the love for your family, your children... still it's wise introspection! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 11:23:00 AM
    nice' audree