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"How Do I Love Thee" How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of being and ideal grace. I love thee to the level of every day’s Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light. I love thee freely, as men strive for right. I love thee purely, as they turn from praise. I love thee with the passion put to use In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith. I love thee with a love I seemed to lose With my lost saints. I love thee with the breath, Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose, I shall but love thee better after death. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "How Do I Need Thee" - Sequel How do I need thee? Let me count the ways. I need thee beneath the safe harbor tides. Your ebb flow reaches my peak as I cry. Continuum leaves need soil within, The breadth of life needs to live, not rescind. I need thee in silence as quiet hides. I need thee in death, I wither in life. I need thee without seen regret, infringed. Allowing rising east skies, sun sets west. I need thee to bathe, vessels deep inside, Within opposition, entwined, bequest. Perceived with love, continued while descried. Songs in tune, sweet man, us dancing abreast, I need thee til' death, together astride. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Date Written: February 11, 2016 For the contest, Second Chance, Sponsor, Broken Wings

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Date: 3/21/2016 1:33:00 PM
Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is well deserving of its placement. I do remember this contest. Your words exude Love from the heart as they flow down the page. Your words sing so gently into the heart, a lullaby of Love's grace. I read this excellent work and i float on the breath of a sigh. A seven and into my faves Laura....Vlad.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/21/2016 5:58:00 PM
IT Is both, Vladislav is my writing name, Mike is my real name. I answer to either Laura. Take your pick. Hugs....MIKE.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/21/2016 5:22:00 PM
Awww...thank you very much! :)-luloo ps..is it Mike or Vlad? Maybe both? :)
Date: 3/21/2016 1:46:00 AM
Great work, well done, congratulations!
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/21/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 3/20/2016 11:44:00 AM
A lovely Sonnet sequel. Laura. So pleased for you that your poem received the placement it deserves in Broken Wings' contest. Congrats! Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/20/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thank you sweet lady Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 2/13/2016 8:06:00 PM
lulu-I read this the other nioght, and again tonight and I guess I was going to say the other night how much this touched me. Is it for a contest? If so, good luck <3
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/14/2016 10:08:00 PM
Katie, yes it is for a contest called "How Do I Love Thee". Soupmail me if you need help entering a contest. I'm more than willing to help I have been in your shoes not too long ago *smiles* -Thanks again -luloo
Date: 2/12/2016 10:32:00 AM
wow! this is just lovely, well penned sequel Laura, excellent
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/12/2016 10:43:00 AM
Thank you White Sage :)*smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/11/2016 4:02:00 PM
gosh Luloo a lovely sonnet good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/11/2016 4:17:00 PM
Thank you lady *smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/11/2016 2:26:00 PM
This is a beauty! Way to go :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/11/2016 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Carol :) *Smiles* -luloo

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