How Could You Do This To Me

You'd think I know to take it slow- (The empty contents of my Soul!) How fierce the Wind may howl and Blow, And send my ship to rapid row O'er seas too sad for me That rock me none too gently Oh, it makes for quite a show When my head hangs so very low...

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/21/2013 5:22:00 PM

Chan The Man This is another poem of despair and sorrow. Why are you tugging at my heart today. You are a bad boy. LOL Hugs Thanks for the insightful comment on my Discrimination poem If anyone picks on you let me know and I will turn evil. LOL

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/22/2013 5:09:00 AM

lol When you are a sad Soul, you write sad things, I suppose. Thanks for the first review on this piece, Sweet Pea! <3