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House of Mirrors

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House of Mirrors

Crowds and solitude still
World - a house of mirrors
I'm the spectator, I'm the show

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  1. Date: 12/17/2012 8:19:00 AM
    a very "reflective" poem! and it is so true for all of us!

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 12:17:00 PM
    A write that leaves the leader to think, nice one Mohammad....:)

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 10:05:00 AM
    Interesting idea put to pen in this verse. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comment on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 10:04:00 AM
    Nice. Pls consider 5/7/5 cylab as: Crowds and solitude..World is a house of mirrors..I'm the spectator; a show. Pls re-entry your haiku; it's beautiful.

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 1:22:00 PM
    "world a house of mirrors" - a provocative line. Original use of the haiku form. keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 4:08:00 PM
    Interesting use of this concise form. Much to think about here. I hope you'll be back at The Soup posting more poems soon. Best wishes. Karen

  1. Date: 1/6/2009 11:25:00 AM
    right...spectator is the audience. missed that one.

  1. Date: 1/6/2009 8:18:00 AM
    you're the audience too. i'm still getting my head around that. Nicely done:)

  1. Date: 12/30/2008 11:58:00 AM
    So much implied in so few words... the 'spectator/show' idea is brilliant. Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 12/28/2008 2:50:00 PM
    such a nice write with the depth of introspection of one's self, hi Mohammad, I hope that this finds you well, take care D-ncye

  1. Date: 12/28/2008 12:43:00 PM
    Very good, Mohammad. The entire mood and introspection revolving around this haiku is exceptional. The last line is brilliant. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 12/28/2008 12:24:00 PM
    `great poetry, great lesson, great haiku. thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 12/23/2008 6:52:00 PM
    Mohammad well written deeply profound write! Laura :)

  1. Date: 12/23/2008 3:33:00 AM
    I hear you here, the one that sees, and the one that moves thropugh without sight. the goal, is to only left with the observer. awqesome! As always, love Kristin

  1. Date: 12/22/2008 7:26:00 PM
    Always much depth and truth to your writing. Wonderful and most interesting haiku. Love, shar

  1. Date: 12/22/2008 12:37:00 PM
    Beautiful conception. Great write. Happy holidays.

  1. Date: 12/22/2008 12:13:00 PM
    Loved this. I love the first line...the many images of yourself giving the illusion of a crowd but only to realize that you are still alone. Nice Haiku.