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Hostile Head Takeover Part 2

A din ensued my imaginary brood with a good dose of misapprehension hauled out their toys and with a deafening noise held band practice to demand my attention My head resounded I was astounded as my voices insisted space be freed then took up position for a spit competition unless their demand I would heed "Spit all you may I refuse to be swayed back to your cupboard, skeleton folk all was well hitherto with my self-made crew till my head friends you chose to provoke." "Dear host, you're unfeeling to your good sense we're appealing repeal the bones' non grata status or your imaginary crew will hold a coup assisted by our posse comitatus." "Skeletons and friends your logic transcends admittedly you've much courage and clout I'll have to engage with our very own sage the inimitable Shadow of Doubt. "After due consultation and much deliberation Shadow and I decision had reached you may rant; you may rave do the Mexican wave yet still be punished for my rules you have breached. "The imagineries and Hubbard to inhabit the cupboard access to my head is forever denied you skeletons will hoard keep my secrets well-stored in my head where you henceforth will reside." There's no happy ever after my world is now dafter cramped, the skeletons keep knotting their chains with more space at hand my imaginary band multiplied. I'm now doubly insane ***************************************

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/29/2013 2:29:00 PM
Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm a fan
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Date: 7/24/2013 4:23:00 PM
Haha, you are thoroughly cracked and I love it. I have never read something so impossibly posible. Smiles
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Date: 5/23/2013 11:14:00 AM
both super Delysia, great stuff xx
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Date: 5/22/2013 2:26:00 PM
Sophisticated language in this write Delysia - powerful lesson of trust and cooperation - J.A.B. %
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Date: 5/19/2013 10:40:00 AM
You take the reader on a most insanely wild journey. The theme and imagery combined created a fantastic experience for the reader. Exceptional !
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Date: 5/13/2013 8:52:00 PM
You have done it again, fascinated me with your whimsical words. fine poetry. Thanks for your visit to hillbilly hand jive.
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Date: 5/12/2013 1:44:00 PM
Fascinating plots,licia... reminds me of Steven Spielberg's series , Amazing Stories... great job, you wordsmith! : ) huggs
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Date: 5/10/2013 7:13:00 PM
Hello Delysia, :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
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Date: 5/10/2013 4:22:00 AM
Great rhythm, rhyme and flow to this work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Those things in the cupboard well I would be afraid to open mine..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/9/2013 10:40:00 AM
Both 're great... well done~A.O
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Date: 5/8/2013 2:59:00 PM
Great work and Congratulations on the win. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
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Date: 5/8/2013 11:44:00 AM
good morning, thanks for your morning visit.
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Date: 5/7/2013 6:31:00 PM
This deserves congrats on both pages Delysia, well done. Take care, Richard
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Date: 5/4/2013 2:41:00 PM
Cute piece. It is right to write...
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Date: 5/3/2013 5:48:00 PM
Hey Delsyia, great poem. The rhyming scheme is one I use a lot myself, however, I combine lines 1&2 and 4&5 so that it forms an internal rhyme, then you are left with 4 lines per stanza instead of six. Makes for easier reading, I think. Also, if you have multiple parts, post them in reverse order. That way they show up in order on your page. Love it! Cheers, Roy
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Date: 5/3/2013 4:40:00 PM
Sometimes there's no truce in that war, very well done, blessings Carl
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Date: 5/3/2013 4:14:00 PM
Have re-read, have to stop now though, I don't em latching onto me, toooo susceptible lol
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Date: 5/3/2013 12:46:00 PM
Gah awesome dark poem! D well rhymed narrative leaves us spellbound to d end. Kudos.
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Date: 5/2/2013 1:33:00 AM
Good morning-- our side of the world. Just checking my inbox, and read through your 'hostile head takeover 2'-- I enjoyed reading how the 'battle' continued-- those people in our heads-- past skeletons we endeavour to keep in chains.... they normally win and break free eventually. Very clever poem.
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Date: 4/29/2013 7:52:00 PM
It is amazing and crazy... i love the second part a bit more... A very clever and entertaining poem... always~ Linda
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Date: 4/29/2013 1:18:00 PM
A fantastic sequel to the 1st! Embrace the insanity! All normal people do it. ;) Excellent job!
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Date: 4/29/2013 6:45:00 AM
oh boy have you been in my head recently this so sums things up for me I am on your wave length.. brilliant love it xx
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Date: 4/28/2013 9:33:00 PM
Fantastic! What a tale you've created, with voices, skeletons, bones and cupboards. I'm going to have to read both parts again, maybe more than once... Jack
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Date: 4/28/2013 6:39:00 PM
And just as funny as Part 1. Hope we don't wait as long for your next posting.-Red
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Date: 4/28/2013 4:18:00 PM
Excellent write, though I thought you were already doubly insane lol, great story, your writing is fantastic. Take care, Richard
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