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Horse Like Speed - Pathya Va

Chariots fly With horse like speed To lead the field In war so dark The Hittite ruled Kadesh attacked known battle track Five thousand fought. Hittite renowned charioteers Hittites conquered Kadesh Five thousand chariots took part was the largest chariot battle ever Penned by Seren Roberts on August 4th 2014 Contest: Ride on a Pathya Va. By Nette Onclaud Theme: I used the Chariot Theme.

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Date: 8/11/2014 7:32:00 PM
awesome and educational, grats on your win!!
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Date: 8/11/2014 6:50:00 AM
your historical notes and powerful visuals make this piece an interesting one, seren..thanks for supporting my contest and big cheers on your splendid win..huggs
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Date: 8/11/2014 5:41:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Seren!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/11/2014 3:50:00 PM
thank you Dr Upma ....glad you liked it ....Seren
Date: 8/10/2014 11:11:00 AM
Congrats to you Seren...love the history
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/10/2014 8:07:00 PM
Thank you .....Seren
Date: 8/10/2014 9:24:00 AM
congrats on a lovely win Seren:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/10/2014 8:07:00 PM
Thanks Jan ....Seren
Date: 8/10/2014 6:12:00 AM
lovely win Seren, Congrats. Mohan
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/10/2014 7:58:00 AM
Thank you I didn't see my name on the list, congrats to you also ....Seren
Date: 8/10/2014 5:28:00 AM
What a fine approach to the theme of the poem, congrats, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/10/2014 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Ram I was unsure as to what I wax doing if I am totally honest......Seren

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