Life's Priceless

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Shrinking planet changing place barbaric acts shame mankind. Human species in disgrace fortune driven future blind. Corrupt hearts exploiting hate modern madness ancient brew. Inner anger molding fate flawed logic displaces true. Children starving babies die begging food poverty grinds. Hungry bellies anguished cry twisted bodies crippled minds. Exciting times untamed fun holy war justifies thrill. Early grave revengeful gun God's blessing sanctifies kill. Pushing limits people bare cunning minds always agree. Burnt forests polluted air life’s priceless apathy's free.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/16/2018 3:11:00 PM

The ugly truth. So well penned, Emile.

Mockingbird Stevenson

Date: 12/2/2015 4:03:00 AM

Excellent write - thank you for sharing!

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/2/2015 8:39:00 AM

Thanks Mockingbird, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/1/2015 9:16:00 PM

G'day Emile... the trouble is Emile, everybody is right but everybody else is wrong and so the human plague continues to destroy everything and in the future will destroy itself. Well done Emile - Lindsay

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/2/2015 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Lindsay, I appreciate your input. Emile.

David Meade

Date: 12/1/2015 7:08:00 PM

you have captured the evil that kills the human soul . . .

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/2/2015 8:38:00 AM

Thanks David, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Lauren Patton

Date: 12/1/2015 4:15:00 PM

Deep my friend, true and deep.

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/2/2015 8:38:00 AM

Thanks Lauren, I appreciate your support. Emile.