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~Hope~ (1) (Double Tetractys) Hope Makes us Very strong It helps us dream When we keep our hopes the sun shines brighter Without hope the sun doesn't shine, there's nothing You lose love, dreams So always Keep your Hopes Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011 April.30.2016 ~Author's Notes: "The Tetractys" is a poetic form or style created by Ray Stebbing.

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/2/2016 1:55:00 PM

This is awesome... Thank you so much for this wonderful share

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/30/2016 1:54:00 PM

Excellent expression oh hope, philosophically done my lovely friend. A 7 sure. Loved always, bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/1/2016 12:00:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly BL,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 4/30/2016 12:19:00 PM

Hope like a key of a wonderful lady that dreams and wakes up in another dream. Dream like a play of happiness learnt from Pollianna, an old serial TV enchanting gentle hearts. Congrat.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/30/2016 11:59:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Ovidiu, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D