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“Sometimes too much drink is barely enough.” Mark Twain, on Alcoholism 05 July 2015 Poem of the Day - 07 July 2015 Write With the Wit of Twain Contest - 4th Place Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/8/2015 3:47:00 PM

Love it, and ouch!!! Always, Laura

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2015 5:32:00 AM

!!! : > )...Way to go.Congrats..Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 7/21/2015 1:30:00 AM

Excellent, Kim!! Poor pirate...a sobering experience, I would say! Congrats on your win...very much deserved:) hugs // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/20/2015 9:14:00 PM

Ouch! That would teach me not to get drunk! Congrats on your win, Kim! Love, Kim

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/20/2015 4:23:00 PM

So funny, Reminds me of Ruprecht and his fork in the movie, 'Dirty Rotten Scoundrels'. Congrats on your win. SuZ

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/20/2015 2:26:00 PM

And I am 'hooked' on this clever, funny. and VERY original limerick Kim...Can't help wondering if he did the same after a bath, especially..Well, um--- Okay, we won't go there...MANY congrats - Tim

James Inman

Date: 7/20/2015 10:26:00 AM

A teaching moment. Enjoyed it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2015 3:03:00 PM

hey, I am also seeing down here that you got a POD for this one also. So a double congrats to you and for a win in my contest as well. GREAT job, Kim!

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 2:32:00 PM

Kim, Congratulations on your awesome win... LOVE SKAT

Abdul Malik

Date: 7/19/2015 2:14:00 PM

This is good, it reminds me not to rub my face with a hook! Congrats.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/19/2015 1:35:00 PM

Hi Kim, just back to say congratulations, knew it would do well. Viv x

Lycia Harding

Date: 7/19/2015 12:38:00 PM

Haha! Cause and effect, baby! Love this one Kim, congrats on your win! xoxo

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/19/2015 12:08:00 PM

Kim, I just stopped by to say congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 7/19/2015 10:57:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/9/2015 11:27:00 PM

Wow! What a powerful message done in a humorous style, dear. You are deserving of POTD with this! :) Congrats...I'm a little late...but better late than never.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2015 4:24:00 AM

a lovely positive message - congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 7/8/2015 12:49:00 AM

Kim congratulations on Poem Of The Day with this great limerick poem, enjoy the honor

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/8/2015 12:39:00 AM

Great Limerick, Kim, and congrats on POTD. Reminded me of the conversation I heard when a man asked a friend about his father, and the friend replied he'd died. "How?" asked the man. His friend said that a train had ran over his finger. "His finger? And he died?". "yeah," said his friend,, "he was picking his nose at the time". Viv x

Judy Konos

Date: 7/7/2015 10:59:00 PM

Congratulations Poem of the Day....

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/7/2015 10:29:00 PM

A good one, clever lady! Congrats to you on being chosen TPOD! Hugs, Rhonda

Lycia Harding

Date: 7/7/2015 7:16:00 PM

Ha! Limericks are my fave. Gongrats, Kim!

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/7/2015 8:46:00 PM

:'P

Shane Cooper

Date: 7/7/2015 5:02:00 PM

Very clever Patrice. Loved it. Congrats on POTD. love Shane xxx

Shane Cooper
Date: 7/8/2015 1:33:00 AM

Ahhh! Well the little black duck reference is about a cartoon character that I identify closely with ( i will type a http: address below and leave you to find out who it is). And as you might have guessed I am a half glass empty person.c'est la vie! http://members.ozemail.com.au/~karl/images/daffy-duck.png

Shane Cooper
Date: 7/7/2015 8:01:00 PM

I was talked into a change to embrace reality, and yes kim it was funny, thanks for the giggles they are more valuable than diamonds to this little black duck. love Shane xxx :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2015 2:47:00 PM

congrats on poem of the day made me giggle again:-) Hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/7/2015 12:12:00 PM

I loved seeing this clever poem as POTD Kim! Big congrats. It is a perfect example of a Limerick.

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/7/2015 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations Kim on POTD!! A funny limerick for sure. (Mark Twain was always very well-known for his one-liners too.) Best Wishes, Gary