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Choosing a Hotel

I had a lot of trouble In choosing a hotel, 'Cause with my expectations Nothing went too well. - There's one right up the cliff, But it stands up way too tall It might just break and tumble, And what if we all fall? There's one that's in the ocean, And it's good, I've heard before But what just if the tide comes in, And washes us to the shore? I love the one that's high in air, It's called the "Cozy den", But what if we face breathing troubles, 'Cause there's no oxygen? All these places aren't too good, They all just leave us dead The only thing we can do right now Is to stay back home instead.

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Date: 4/17/2016 2:20:00 PM
Hi Sneha! Just managed to find a poem of yours which I had failed to read:) It makes for a pleasant and entertaining read. My mum used to say that the best hotel is home!! I believe that she was right! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/17/2016 2:23:00 PM
Of course! Thank you so much for your support and comments; appreciate your visits!! :) :)
Date: 6/17/2014 2:41:00 AM
Nice win Sneha....Love ~SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2014 2:09:00 AM
Sneha.... Congratulations:) Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest... Stop by and enjoy my newest poem "Mr President" OR my fresh blog "NOT ENOUGH" if you want or have time. :):):) Hugs & Love ~~ LINDA ~~
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Date: 6/13/2014 9:41:00 PM
Nice writing Sneha. Verlena
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Date: 5/29/2014 3:55:00 AM
Where is your home if I may ask? I'm sure there are risks at home as well. Life and its risks. Great write.
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