Get Your Premium Membership

Home In the Empire of Ice

They poke small heads out from their moms’ underbellies. Feeling chilled, they retreat to their parents’ safe spot. Receiving nourishment, the chicks grow and adapt. One day, left alone, beckoned by the sea, they take the plunge. and for five years, they play, chasing waters’ flow! Grown and full, they emerge on land, swollen stomachs sliding on ice. Facing storms, determined. . . they waddle trekking for miles home. Based on information from the documentary "March of the Penguins" and for David Williams' Contest:True Diminishing Hexaverse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 7/6/2012 10:44:00 AM
Language, imagery, flow and arrangement... this has it all! and a lovely story to boot. Kudos to you, dear Andrea!! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2012 12:31:00 PM
congrats on your win Andrea..
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2012 9:40:00 PM
this should be the intro for the docu, andie... splendidly written!.. congrats with hugggs!.. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2012 9:37:00 AM
Yike I was wondering which bird it was! Ain't life grand! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2012 8:47:00 AM
Wonderful piece,Andrea..Great write on penguins..Congratulations on your win..
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2012 2:01:00 PM
Oh, ....this WAS A WINNER! Great to see!....(I am in a very foul mood as the Not-so-polite ground hog destroyed some areas of my yard!) Off to tractor trailer surplus store!!! It's trap time!.....Grrrrrr....Isn't is funny how one rodent can ruin your day!?...I returned a soup mail...
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2012 12:05:00 PM
Gotta love that documentary, Andrea...Those dedicated photographers touched my heart the most...Documentaries can take almost a lifetime to produce and are the life's work of a few...You know my dad used to call me Pen-gwen and so I was always drawn to these creatures of ice...Very smooth flow...gwendolen
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2012 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2012 2:12:00 AM
Hey Andrea, another wonderfully written, distinctly informative write. Congrats on your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 7:53:00 PM
Fun read, and well done! Congratulations on your win as well! Thank you also for your comments on my poem.~Trudy~
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot I love penguins too xx
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 11:31:00 AM
Andrea~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 10:59:00 AM
Andrea, I don't know what 'March of the Penguins' is but I liked your poem, thanks for entering and well done..David
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 10:06:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this informative piece, Andrea. I'm partial to penguins - they are just so darn cute! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 8:36:00 AM
Hey Andie big congrats on your win... very nice write my friend...like the poem title a lot. Have a wonderful day...:)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2012 8:21:00 AM
Beautifully penned on penguin,Andrea!Congratulations on your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/20/2012 10:42:00 AM
AS you know I love the nature series and totally the show. I am using this new lap top and it had such a wide base at the bottom. I can barely reach the keys mine at home is smaller. Just had a few moments here to see what's new. Anyway awesome poem for the contest. love phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 6/17/2012 1:58:00 PM
Your descriptions brought a smile, Thank you for sharing this poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/16/2012 12:22:00 PM
LOL, love the descriptions here - so like those penguins, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 6/16/2012 11:57:00 AM
really creative arrangement, powerful stuff. *SMILES* RON
Login to Reply
Date: 6/16/2012 8:26:00 AM
Nice expression of the information and wish you best in the contest. Loved always bl
Login to Reply
Date: 6/16/2012 6:10:00 AM
Brilliant write. Well done. tfs
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2012 6:08:00 PM
nice write Andrea,wish you the best in davids' contest
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2012 2:47:00 PM
Oh!__This is a great work..I like the Diminishing Hexaverse form a lot anyway..This Penguins will be on top of the winners' circle instead of the bottom..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2012 2:06:00 PM
excellent write Andrea and so full of information to this sweet species.. great wording to depict their plight with awesome imagery luv.. I spoke to Constance by phone yesterday.. she is having surgery Wednesday and is thankful for blog u posted for her.. we luv her and she has family and friends visiting now.. great..
Login to Reply
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things