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Hold On Darling - I'M Coming

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He’s always waiting for me – he’s as impatient as can be The car engine is running - I shout ‘Darling I’m coming’ But we don’t need to be with mum until three! MEN! 30th March 2015

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/8/2015 9:00:00 AM

Another 7 for another wonderful write. My husband invented the word "IMPATIENT" . Impatient people can be a pain in the butt. Blessings dear friend Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2015 11:35:00 AM

I love turning the tables on my hubby standing their in MY coat - think he gets the message now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 4/4/2015 6:42:00 AM

Interesting and funny! Visitation to this piece is worth commenting and rating so high! Its a lovely piece friend. Thanks for the share.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/4/2015 6:44:00 AM

Thanks so much Funom always a pleasure to see you visit my page:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/3/2015 6:25:00 PM

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2015 6:29:00 PM

This was the final one in the trilogy - 'she's wet', 'she's dry' and now 'hold on darling - i'm coming' lol Thanks so much my friend glad I made you smile:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/31/2015 7:16:00 PM

lol...I have that with my 15 year old daughter now... I'm always waiting in the car for her.....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2015 2:22:00 AM

I turn the tables - get my coat on and irritate him that he's not ready lol:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 3/31/2015 12:28:00 PM

Haha, another chuckler Jan. Happy Tuesday evening to you, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/31/2015 4:18:00 PM

Cheers James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 3/31/2015 4:08:00 AM

A beautiful woman is always worth waiting for...good poetry like this, doesn't need a picture!...nice realist pen Jan...Peter.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/31/2015 7:25:00 AM

Thanks Peter:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/30/2015 6:13:00 PM

Yes Dear! (Men if you want to be happy, you must learn this line and you must use it...a lot...a heck of a lot!!!!) Yes Dear!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2015 6:17:00 PM

LOL Armand you are a quick learner lol - I can blame these cheeky poems firmly at the feet of you and Arthur- I mean how can i refuse a challenge like writing about 'shes wet' and 'she's dry lol!' Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2015 6:11:00 PM

Yes, MEN!! such impatience. I bet you are not the first woman to be inspired to write on THIS topic.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2015 6:15:00 PM

LOL - oh I do love this banter:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/30/2015 6:14:00 PM

Yes she is!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/30/2015 5:25:00 PM

LOL! sheesh...girl! You're in your element! More hugs! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2015 5:31:00 PM

Oh I am innocent - the blame totally lies at the feet of Armand and Arthur Vaso who challenged me with their comments lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/30/2015 1:48:00 PM

Okay now I see who sparked this little war. These have been fun to read, so thanks for your creativity.~ PS I'm impressed that these have not degenerated into something a bit risque with the provoking title...LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2015 2:03:00 PM

I am VERY well behaved Janet - I get spurred on by the others lol - the titles are errr creative to draw in the readers lol:-) Hugs Jan xx