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Below is the poem entitled HMmmmmm....? which was written by poet Maryam Jameela Haniff. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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My heart is
bumping, thumping
jumping all around

I feel like
dancing, singing
running round n round

I can't stop
giggling, laughing
smiling all around

None can imagine
how I feel
something has happen
that doesn't seem real

A new something
I think I've found
that makes me want 
to jump off the ground.

Copyright © Maryam Jameela Haniff

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  1. Date: 4/7/2009 4:40:00 PM
    Wonderful write, made me think of being a little girl. Brings back lots of memories....Aleera

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 11:13:00 PM
    its love love,lovely write,you make me feel like singing out -love

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 8:24:00 PM
    Smile~Well, I hope its kind of like love? Or even better?~"Hello Gifted & Dear Maryam!!!:):)~I sincerely hope that life has been treating 'You & Yours' wonderfully dear!!?:):)~It sounds as though within Your case~something joyous and hopefully beautiful has occured!!?~I truly hope so!!!:):)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Yours, John!!!"~Bye Dear Maryam:):)

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 8:15:00 PM
    You must have found love, Maryam!! Love the rhythm in this delightful, uplifting poem!

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 5:52:00 PM
    Fascinating.... Would you pls whisper who came back? or just discovered lost and found?? truly beautiful poetry...all the best.

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 4:00:00 PM
    Creative title. Got a chuckle out of this lighthearted poem. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 3:52:00 PM
    Well, that can't be bad!! Bouncy phrasing a simple straightforward language... sounds like love to me! Best wishes, Keith