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Hit and Run

In the brain of a maniac There lives a small child Soiled and hungry With a die and jack And a thimble that rumbles He left his leg in Seattle On a bridge in the rain Down low on the mainstream Down low in the water Swings a rope made of hemp And twigs for a ladder The place it must seem Is for a murders row But he’s harmed no one Not even himself The days go by And they fade into dark Murky and scary Filled with lizards and larks And a muddy old watch Time is of the essence As he boils his roots Of sassafras and basil And slips off his boots Found on the subway He only needs one Because he left his left leg in Seattle After being a hit and run.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/9/2013 4:23:00 AM
Wow...such impact this one has. You really have a way of expressing so nicely through poetry form and also story form. Gotta agree with cherie there. Always, Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/9/2013 4:23:00 AM
Oh, and I love your twisted mind!
Date: 8/21/2013 10:39:00 PM
Your thoughts & writes,, are so original:) I love the way you write and the pictures you paint in someones, mind reading this poem,,,,amazing:0) cherie...
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/22/2013 5:26:00 AM
Thanks Cherie. I appreciate it your kind words and thoughtfulness. These poems just flow out of me. I have no idea where they come from. l think my mind is a little twisted perhaps! HA! Kilmer
Date: 8/20/2013 8:35:00 PM
You have a unique mind..I love your stuff..its slam poetry I think...I love it. BG
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/20/2013 8:38:00 PM
Barbara, I think I like the term "slam poetry" you have coined a phrase and I might have to steal it! Thanks so much for the kind words. Kilmer

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