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His Woman- Contest Version Coming Soon

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His Woman- Contest Version Coming Soon

He had tasted her cherry lips before
And yet, he lingered there
Gauging her response
Wanting her to know
She was in control

She kissed him back
Her tongue licking his lips
As she molded her form into his
Surrender in every limb

He broke away
And to the sound of her sighs
He claimed her neck
Her scent bursting fresh with each heart beat
Driving his need further
Consuming sun kissed skin, he finally reached
What he’d only touched in his dreams
She opened her eyes and looked at him questioningly
Smiling coyly at his awed look…she pulled him closer
“Don’t worry,” a breathless whisper 
“I’m not afraid”……and she placed his hand on the bow
That held together her translucent negligee….and with a tug it fell away
Showing her ample bosom taut with expectation
In awe he touched virgin territory…claiming it for his own
Incredulous that he was the chosen one to awaken passion in her
In turn, he reverently closed his lips over each one 
As he drew into his mouth the unclaimed peaks
Savoring what no other had reached or tasted before

With his free hand
He continued to explore
Her quickened breathing, the impetus
For him to go on, to touch, to caress, and to possess
Fingers hovering over her navel…then gently touching the indentation
But a symbol of the deeper entrance to her soul
Where his hand now paused, having arrived at the desired abode
Of passion just beginning to awaken

His fingers slowly gently explored the entrance
Travelers rewarded by a liquid welcome 
A quick gasp made him look up into her eyes
He moved his lips to her ear
“Trust me,” he could barely whisper
And he confirmed it in a commanding kiss
Signaling his control
And she opened up more
Her mouth, her lips, her core
Open for him to explore
He felt her body start to tremble
Wanting more
As his fingers spoke with urgent promise
Of what else was in store
The noises escaping from her lips
Quickening him along
To taste her essence
One never tasted before

Between gasps, words he needed to hear
It was all he could do to harness his power
To make his descent into her painless 
She groaned out a plea, "Take me!"
He held nothing back
Breaking through virginity’s wall
Watching her face twist with pain, then awe
As he finally found release
Shaking like a leaf
His tension gone
His victory sweet
She wrapped her arms around him
Reaching up to kiss his lips
Whispering into his hair, ”Now, I am...Yours.”
And then he lay in her arms
Enveloped in the charms
Of the girl
He had made into a woman

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 8/26/2013 10:44:00 AM
    A very nice love poem packed with deep intense passion. I truly enjoyed this one.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/26/2013 12:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Christine....I was thinking of joining Nette's contest, but...I can't whittle this down to size! I got carried away! Thanks for the visit!
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Loved it Eileen ...Seren

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/26/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awwwwwww.....thanks, Seren! How sweet of you!
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Deep love, therefore I love. Beautiful Love, Juli-Michelle

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/26/2013 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry is beautiful, my dear. The sweetest thing on earth. Thanks for the post.
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:09:00 AM
    To the limits! I love it! Classy sensuality & desire. Planting of the seed to make her blossom. Intense.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/26/2013 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    OH DRAKE! Thanks for the word...CLASSY. Sometimes I worry about content, but good grief, if we can't write about the act of love....the ultimate of human emotion...what is there to write about? ;) Ok...that was extreme, but you know what I beautiful...You had made mention of this in your poem, Her Climactic Silence...Beautiful imagery! I'm VERY intense...too much at times!
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Sexy and dramatic, a splendid mixture!

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/26/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) I got it right? Thanks, Richard!
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:10:00 AM
    Yes, that's his woman. Very strong and deep romantic write. Well penned. Tfs

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 8/26/2013 12:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thank you, Ravi...Now, she IS his woman! Never been with another....