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His Wait

I move along my path in cosmic silence, a boulder to those shiny stones, the stars I keep in sight. The many times I curve around the radiating fountain of my force seems everlasting. The space I travel through is vast, and yet. . . . to the eye of my Creator, this voyage I make is but a jaunt. His wait for me to cease will have been a pittance of a pause. I believe this has lost twice. Trying for third time a charm. hahaha

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/20/2012 11:49:00 AM
Congrats on this awesome poem. love phyl
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Date: 4/16/2012 10:01:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your win.Loved it on first read.Glad to share the placement with you.
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Date: 4/16/2012 3:41:00 PM
Larger than the depth of soul. The vastness darker than black coal. His vision sees beyond perception. As we await our new conception.
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 4:59:00 PM
Congrats Andrea for your well deserved placing in Brian`s contest...Wonderful piece,well written...
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Date: 4/15/2012 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your continued success...lol Well done in Brian's contest! big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:25:00 PM
This is short, but very profound. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:48:00 AM
I like your short live story. Makes sense. Love, daver
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:07:00 AM
yes, indeed - thought provoking and deep write here, andrea
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:25:00 AM
Well said, sweet friend.
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:53:00 PM
Love this poetic beauty.
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Date: 4/13/2012 2:44:00 PM
A very pertinant and pithy write on the pittance of his pause Andrea..) take care Joe...
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:44:00 AM
love this deep write, my friend
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:23:00 AM
Wow! This is so deep and spiritual...I love it...And thanks for all the nice comments...Marty
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Date: 4/13/2012 8:07:00 AM
well quite breathtaking write Andrea.. definite expression of inner persona luv.. is it for contest? good luck if so.. the words used are simply phenomenal ..too.. luv..
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Date: 4/13/2012 8:01:00 AM
Excellent work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Don't know if it is for a contest or not..I guess we will see..Thanks for stopping by...I had written a few while on vacation and just posted a little this morn..Sara
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Date: 4/12/2012 11:50:00 PM
very good as always,,great to see ya again,,trying to get back up on the soup...
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Date: 4/12/2012 11:10:00 PM
A soulful journey!!!Love it!Best wishes Andrea.
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Date: 4/12/2012 9:35:00 AM
Well done.. The rhythmic flow and word play is immaculate in this creative poem.. What a beauty..:JP]
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Date: 4/12/2012 5:58:00 AM
Ow geee.. i feel like i'm getting out of my body in a journey to meet my creator and its seems so serene and wonderful.. beautiful!
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Date: 4/12/2012 5:50:00 AM
You got me thinking this morning, Andrea! A great write which could have many interpretations. I love that. Have a great day!! Rhonda
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Date: 4/12/2012 2:04:00 AM
Andrea, ah but in that short jaunt, you move mountains with your words..David
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Date: 4/12/2012 1:15:00 AM
Andi you make it look so so easy. This is nice. Charles
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