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His Wait

I move along my path in cosmic silence, a boulder to those shiny stones, the stars I keep in sight. The many times I curve around the radiating fountain of my force seems everlasting. The space I travel through is vast, and yet. . . . to the eye of my Creator, this voyage I make is but a jaunt. His wait for me to cease will have been a pittance of a pause.

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  1. Date: 4/20/2012 11:49:00 AM
    Congrats on this awesome poem. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:01:00 PM
    Congrats Andrea on your win.Loved it on first read.Glad to share the placement with you.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 3:41:00 PM
    Larger than the depth of soul. The vastness darker than black coal. His vision sees beyond perception. As we await our new conception.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:48:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 4:59:00 PM
    Congrats Andrea for your well deserved placing in Brian`s contest...Wonderful piece,well written...

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 11:30:00 AM
    Congratulations on your continued Well done in Brian's contest! big hugs,love deb

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:25:00 PM
    This is short, but very profound. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:48:00 AM
    I like your short live story. Makes sense. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:07:00 AM
    yes, indeed - thought provoking and deep write here, andrea

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:25:00 AM
    Well said, sweet friend.

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:53:00 PM
    Love this poetic beauty.

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 2:44:00 PM
    A very pertinant and pithy write on the pittance of his pause Andrea..) take care Joe...

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:44:00 AM
    love this deep write, my friend

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:23:00 AM
    Wow! This is so deep and spiritual...I love it...And thanks for all the nice comments...Marty

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 8:07:00 AM
    well quite breathtaking write Andrea.. definite expression of inner persona luv.. is it for contest? good luck if so.. the words used are simply phenomenal ..too.. luv..

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 8:01:00 AM
    Excellent work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Don't know if it is for a contest or not..I guess we will see..Thanks for stopping by...I had written a few while on vacation and just posted a little this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 11:50:00 PM
    very good as always,,great to see ya again,,trying to get back up on the soup...

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 11:10:00 PM
    A soulful journey!!!Love it!Best wishes Andrea.

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 6:35:00 PM
    Words from your higher power scribed here Andrea enjoyed reading such inspiration hugs vie

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 11:34:00 AM
    WOW! A masterpiece! Did I say perfect? One more of your beauties going to my FAVs! Perfect!