His Promise - the Skeleton Key

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~His Promise~ (Skeleton Key) Christ Came**And Rose And now He sits with God His Father And one day He'll return Need to be prepared all the time Because no one knows the day or the hour But He promised that He'll return And God will never lie Cause He's perfect. He tells truth I just Accept It want Also Believe It.That's The way I feel My faith On Him Can't be Shaken. It is too strong. My hope always Rest in God's hands. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 September.30.2015 ~Author's notes: The "Skeleton Key" is a poetry style created by Dorian Petersen Potter, aka ladydp2000, on September,17,2010.

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Lewis Nyaga

Date: 10/5/2015 3:12:00 AM

The images are vivid and delighting and on finally reading the poem you get a taste of the divine... its almost as though those words actually open the gates of paradise//blessings

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/21/2015 5:32:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Lewis,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, comments and all:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/30/2015 5:12:00 AM

- A piece of art, Dorian - Beautiful! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/2/2015 1:28:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Anne-Lise,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I do appreciate it all so very much my very dear friend.You're very kind Anne!Sending you love and prayers.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always! Hugs!:)D