His Lady

It was his lady, he always talked about. She had caputred his heart from the start. Everyone knew that he loved her. He didn't think , he could live without her. They went together everywhere. There They go people would say. They never part night or day. He told his lady - I give you my love - from you, my heart will never part She and I will be together for eternity. We will travel the world side by side my lady and I. Fast like the wind we will ride my Harley Davison and I. She is my lady and I am her man. I know that now you will understand, why she and I go hand in hand. She was his lady and he was her man...
04/21/2012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/11/2012 12:42:00 AM
Thanks, Lucilla, for your kind comments. His Lady is a sweet poem - enjoyed the read. Love, Maureen
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Maureen, I'm glad that you liked my poem. My cousin has a harley Davison. He loved it more than anything else. That is the reason for the poem. Lucilla
Date: 4/21/2012 8:04:00 PM
WOW...Such wonderful romance this is. Stupendous write....Elliott xoxoxo
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Date: 4/21/2012 6:24:00 PM
lovely
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Date: 4/21/2012 5:06:00 PM
Ideal of what a relationship should be..Two interlaced forever..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by...Your presence at my work was uplifting.Sara
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Date: 4/21/2012 2:00:00 PM
Romantic written Lucilla, like it alot. - Have a lovely weekend in the wind on your Harley Davison >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/21/2012 10:05:00 AM
I really like this one... I Find it very expressive... thanks for sharing Lucilla... much love Jonathan
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