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Hints of Autumn

I Clear Water Mirror Clear water mirrors the trees; caressing shades of green dress them still. Of late, the evenings hold a chill; the season bend approaches; ending summer's stronger scented flowers along the lane nod and point to God. II First Tang of Leaves Dying leaves' first tang tints the air, crisp, pungent flavor of late August haze; soon their fall will glaze the pond with riotous, colorful display. Nature raises her director's wand and conducts the insects' praise. © Faye Lanham Gibson, August 17, 2015

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Date: 8/22/2015 5:45:00 PM
Such lovely imagery Faye good luck in the contest:-) after a year jadazzle are finally reunited and writing poetry again - dreams do come true! :-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/18/2015 11:59:00 AM
A Beautiful, hints of Autumn, poem Faye. Loved it. Best of luck in the contest. ~~~Darlene
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:56:00 PM
:) Such lovely images here, Faye. My favorite was the first two lines of the second stanza....glazing the pond...what a thrilling site. Good luck in the contest, and thanks for your lovely visit today. Hugs
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