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Hidden In the Snow

================================== Flakes from earths thin winter coat coat lakes where skaters spin below. Below the ice on which they float, float perils hidden in the snow. ================================== Nov 19, 2015

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Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/5/2016 2:12:00 PM

Congrats on ur win with this lovely poem....hugs / / :) dalia

Lycia Harding
Date: 1/6/2016 11:55:00 AM

Thank you, Dalia! xoxo

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/25/2015 5:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Lycia! Love, Kim

Lycia Harding
Date: 11/25/2015 7:09:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! xoxoxo

Lin Lane

Date: 11/21/2015 4:09:00 AM

Nicely written, Lycia. Congratulations.

Lycia Harding
Date: 11/21/2015 10:05:00 AM

Thank you, Lin! xoxo

Jan Allison

Date: 11/21/2015 3:49:00 AM

love the form you used Lycia congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Lycia Harding
Date: 11/21/2015 10:08:00 AM

Thank you, Jan! This is that style invented by Nette Oncloud where each line begins with the last word of the previous line. xoxo

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/21/2015 3:39:00 AM

Congrats on your amazing WIN Lycia! ;-)

Lycia Harding
Date: 11/21/2015 12:01:00 PM

Thank you, T.K! xoxo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/21/2015 12:03:00 AM

How lovely Lycia .. congrats on awesome win!

Lycia Harding
Date: 11/21/2015 12:04:00 PM

Thank you, Dr. Sharma! xoxo

Skat A

Date: 11/20/2015 8:01:00 PM

Lycia, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT

Lycia Harding
Date: 11/21/2015 10:02:00 AM

Thank you, Skitty SKAT! xoxo

Eric Boddie

Date: 11/18/2015 8:43:00 PM

hidden by the snow....snow is all they know....know that they will incite....incite the inspiration for this write....write your name on my heart as a forever friend....friend me so that all I can ever do is win....;)

Lycia Harding
Date: 11/18/2015 11:07:00 PM

Yay! You did it on your very first try! This format is fun but tricky, huh?

Lin Lane

Date: 11/18/2015 6:12:00 AM

Hi, Lycia. I had to think about this one....you gave me an 'ummm' moment. It's really good. ~ Lin~

Lycia Harding
Date: 11/18/2015 10:15:00 AM

Thank you, Lin! xoxo