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Hey Adam!

Hey Adam, come lay under this tree,

I've got something for you, have you something for me?

I have this apple, it's red and delicious,

Given to me by a snake, he looked very suspicious.

Now show me what is it you have for me?

Ah, lots of those mushrooms you found under the tree!

Oh Adam, oh Adam

What gave us this knowledge,

Was it the apple, or the mushrooms you made into porridge.

The mushrooms you picked, they look so phallic,

Oh Adam, oh Adam, this is so phychedelic!

We lay here in this beauty of Eden with knowledge,

Was it the apple or was it the porridge?

To The highlander!

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  1. Date: 6/7/2010 12:21:00 PM
    Wonderful rhyme Simone, it make me chuckle and threw images into my mind. Thank you for honouring me as your Adam > have a lovely evening >> James

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 11:39:00 PM
    Adam and Eve 'shrooming! Great! Love it!

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 9:00:00 PM
    Congrats Simone on your winning poem in Debbie's contest with this wonderful write .. a great win to enjoy my friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 8:59:00 PM
    Hey,you really outdid yourself with this one. ME LIKES!! I would hate to be the judge on all these Eve poems.LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 8:53:00 PM
    Holy Smokes Simone..this is terrific and so happy to see u are one of the EVES for my ADAMS... this is a great one and good luck in Debbie's contest... we are coordinating and the judging should be nothing short of FABULOUS... luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 6:43:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest, Simone...hugs, Jimmy

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 6:07:00 PM
    well done for the contest, good luck,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 5:58:00 PM
    A fine invocation to Adam. Good luck in the contest