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A Mother's Grief Over Her Son's Death

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A true story. My cousin's son , her only child, was taken away in a blink of an eye.

There was a young man of sixteen that was full of life. Never afraid of anything or anyone. He Loved spending time with his family and playing video games with his friends. One night while at a friend’s home, he called his mom and asked if he could play a little longer. Mom argued, it was a school night, but he always had a way of winning her over. His friends only lived a few houses up the street. His mom said, it was fine, but to call her when he was done and on his way home, so she could be waiting for him. As the young man walked and almost approaching the front of his home, he saw a truck approaching him. Thinking it was his dad, he walked over to greet him. There in the front sit of the truck, sat two young men and a young woman. As he neared, the driver pulled out a gun and fired, shooting him once in the abdomen. At hearing the gun shot, mom and her brother ran outside to the street to see what was going on. Shocked to find her son lying on the street. She ran and fell to her knees and held him tight on her lap while he gasped for air. She yelled out for anyone in the neighborhood, to please come and help.” Afraid, no one came out of their homes. Later, when the suspects were in police custody, the police asked the driver; why he had shot the young man? His comment: “Just something to do.” was his reply. 9-1-2014 I was 63 when I started writing poetry. I was encouraged by a cousin older then I to write. She would have me read and critique her work on this poetry site. I did make my own birthday cards for my sons and would write my feelings, but I wouldn't consider them poems. This was my 3rd poem written inspired by the cruel death of my cousins son's murder. The Throwback Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Natasha L Scragg

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Date: 3/12/2022 4:05:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this gem, and for constantly sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 3/23/2015 6:48:00 PM
Eve, children are precious and that's why you should hold on to them for as long as you can, because they can be taken away so quickly. Excellent write!!!!! Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia
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Cynthia Jones
Date: 4/13/2015 5:08:00 PM
I can imagine it was heartbreaking to write. I feel for this child's mother. No words I can say, could help her to feel better. Blessings to you too as well Eve. *S* Cynthia
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/23/2015 9:24:00 PM
This was a very heartbreaking write but his mother is still recovering after 7 years. Children are a blessing from Gold. Blessings dear friend
Date: 10/21/2014 3:04:00 PM
Eve, thank you for sharing this so very sad personal piece with me. My dear one, this just breaks my heart. I am so sorry for your family's great loss. This is so unbelievable. My prayers are with you and your family and I hope that God comforts you in your continued pain and grief. Warmest regards. Pandita
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/21/2014 3:21:00 PM
Thank you for coming by and reading this piece, it was such a devastating. Love and hugs eve sorry for the repost but I am having problems with the computer
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/21/2014 3:20:00 PM
Thank you for coming and reading this piece, it was such a devating loss. love and hugs eve
Date: 9/10/2014 1:13:00 AM
Oh Eve what a sad, sad story, it is so terrible that these things actually happen these days and as Lucy said they can happen when you least expect them, take care my friend.............Vera.........
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Vera Duggan
Date: 9/10/2014 7:45:00 PM
Your writing will improve Eve, I have faith in you.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/10/2014 8:09:00 AM
Thank you, I hope my writing improves with time Eve
Date: 9/2/2014 8:04:00 AM
thank you Lucy , love you cuz
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Date: 9/1/2014 11:38:00 PM
Wow! This is so sad. Things like this happen when you least expect them. Thanks for sharing... Lucy
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