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Herbstbild/Autumn Picture/Imagen De Otoño

Aus grauem Nebel Impressionistische Bilder Der herbstliche Märchenwald Dichter Nebel am Morgen Birgt traurige Einsamkeit --------------------------------- Out of gray fog Impressionistic pictures Autumnal fairy tale forest Dense fog in the morning Shelters only sad loneliness --------------------------------- Desde niebla gris Cuadros impresionistas Bosque de cuentos otoñales Densa niebla por la mañana Salva sólo triste soledad

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Date: 11/22/2010 7:18:00 AM
Hi Gert :) I really like that that third line of yours, for me it sounds so magical-- lovely images as always :) enjoyed this one & hope you're feeling loads better :) ingat-- nikko :)
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Date: 11/16/2010 2:23:00 PM
A wonderful Tanka which does remind me of a Grimms Fairytale story, Gert. Your poems are always impressive whatever the form. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/16/2010 1:31:00 PM
What a nice imagery...Impressionistic picture that shelters only sad loneliness. That is the season we are in now, Gert
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:16:00 AM
A beautiful image described so creatively, Gert! I love the concept of "Autumnal fairy tale forest." That's just how they look on foggy mornings. The last line is very touching. You have the tanka form mastered, Gert, and it's great to see you posting new work again! Love, CArolyn
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:54:00 AM
Such beautiful lines Gert.. so perfectly written.. so uniquely stated.. so elegantly read my friend.. enjoyed this creative piece from your gifted pen today .. have a happy day and be blessed with luv..
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:40:00 AM
Deep Gert, love the fairy tale, you used in your tanka,, makes it avery unique and different way with the image, Enjoyed, and have awonderful day,..p.d.
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