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I must have met her slowly wandering Along a bushy stream, her locks breeze-tossed With cheeks a pinkish rush, fair more than Spring, And I, a woodsman dared to come across This Lady lounging poised among the grass. Her sunlit face wore off into a gloom Beneath a tangled pine from which fresh scent Grew drowsy like her Gaelic robe cast down While handmaids trailed nearby,with wreaths abloom Behind the rays, deep was her discontent. In mild chatters, I heard a lonely spill Bethroed to a Lord she was not inclined To offer hand, stirring blue eyes, wind-chilled And watching her from lilies on the vine, Her beauty sad cascading through mountains, More sad than black,or all that black can pour. Adored privately, I longed to hold her arms Where splashed the murmur of this my heart's veins With all her loveliness did she implore, As calm sorrow drained of her woodland charms. Isaiah Zerbst: George D. Leslie's Contest Nausikaa visual Written by nette onclaaud

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 1:08:00 PM
    interesting one must say! Congrats ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 10:47:00 AM
    Nette, another perfectly beautiful poem. This is certainly painting with words that catch the senses.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 4:32:00 PM
    Nette congratulations on this marvelous poem. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:13:00 AM
    Congratulations nette another beauty from you, well done love xx

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 1:15:00 AM
    Excellent. Very beautiful imagination write. Well done. Enjoyed. tfs

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 7:45:00 PM
    This is a dream to which I should aspire. Beautifully written and easy to read. Mine always involve some bridge guarding Troll or Wayward Wolf and me waking up screaming..... Great work, my dear... Jake

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 6:51:00 PM
    Nette this is a remarkable rhyme. Awe-inspiring my friend. Thank you for the comment on 'Sea Glass'. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 3:26:00 PM
    Gorgeous writing, nette. Lovely to see you here today!

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 2:17:00 PM
    Excellent poem adorned with beautiful imagination. Thanks.....,loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 12:44:00 PM
    I like how you did this from a male perspective.very well done. Thanks for commenting on my poem this morning. I have now finished it. Enjoy your Sunday Nette, Hugs Rick

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 11:37:00 AM
    Wow, the intense nature of this incredible write is wonderful Nette! I was really intrigued by your grandiosity of the meeting of the two and their lustful imagination of each other crescendos to a high mark! You description is extreme and totally awesome my friend! You have masterfully written a tremendous poem here, such a grand write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 11:36:00 AM
    - As always you write beautifully, but this was so sad Nette.- Have a great Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)