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Mysterious Smile

no one saw her invisible pain wrapped in her mysterious smile, no one listened to her silence in the crowd with deaf ears, no one cared about her story that she whispered, no one imagined her drowning in the tides of depression, though she died struggling in deep sea waters, but she suffered in life even before she drowned, now she no more holds sorrows inside her broken heart, she walks freely in the invisible world as all her sufferings settled underneath the deep sea, leaving a mystery. Mystery - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron July 6, 2016. # I put the two pictures together, at the beginning I wrote about the last picture 'she was drowning but nobody saw her struggle'. I used drowning in two ways...drowning in depression and actually drowning in the sea and then I concluded with the second picture 'being invisible'....in the invisible world after death. April 28, 2016. Being invisible #2 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: SKAT A

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Date: 4/28/2016 1:11:00 AM
Hi Raina, I did enjoy the weave of your Invisible poem. "Drowning in the tides of depression" how that must resinate with a multitude of people. Regards, Craig
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 4/28/2016 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Craig...

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