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Her Ring.

Pure precious yellow An endless go round No end to the beginning Is there to be found By strength of devotion My commitment was cast A circle the measure My ardor shall last Donned on your finger To time lapsed unknown Our future the brilliance Within the luminous stone Vows promised sacred My faith you can’t lose Ever more than a partner You are my muse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 10/11/2009 9:24:00 AM
what a man and a beautiful write for your wife charlie hope you print this out and put it on a plaque for her to hang up in house congrats on being featured this week
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Date: 10/10/2009 8:44:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Robert. So happy to see you featured on the Soup this week. I hope that you and your loved ones are well and blessed. Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/10/2009 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 10/9/2009 3:00:00 AM
Charles, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 10/6/2009 7:04:00 AM
congrats on the featured poem, very nice
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:05:00 PM
What an uplifting poem. Sounds like love to me. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 10/5/2009 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week >> James
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:55:00 AM
A lovely poem of love and commitment. Congratulations on this featured work! wonderful!!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Charlie. Love, Carol
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