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Her Beauty Didn'T Stall

Elaborate, softly tailored to suit She’s sure more beautiful than very cute Exquisite form, flawless in many eyes Details of her delight, there’s no disguise She likes to wear tight dresses, to show off I hardly noticed her feeling quite scoffed Because many were ignoring her here She’s just a normal guest it would appear I walked up to her, a smile on my face She saw my approach and ruffled her lace I began to speak with her, this goddess And we talked the night through, I did impress Her beauty didn’t stall, I kept going Now she holds a love that keeps on giving
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/9/2013 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on winning, Russell... Jack
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Date: 6/9/2013 3:02:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your awesome win and very beautiful sonnet my dear friend Russell! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:39:00 PM
Russell congratulations on your awesome win. Well deserved placement. Warm Smile, Connie
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Date: 6/8/2013 11:34:00 AM
Hello Russell, Congratulations!!! nice to see you on Nates' winning list. By the looks of his winners, it seems as if he's a real picky person.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 6/7/2013 8:25:00 PM
congrats on your win, close enough to the theme'
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Date: 1/30/2013 10:31:00 AM
beautiful romantic write, Russell
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Date: 1/29/2013 5:04:00 PM
Sounds like every gals dream! Enjoyed!
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Date: 1/29/2013 2:29:00 PM
to walk in beauty of the night, by some great poet , name cant quite, as mystic says it is , your lines do have the fizz, yessir yer doing right :)
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