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Hen-Egg-Omelette

a mother hen peeps through the kitchen window... yummy omelette

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/3/2011 8:33:00 PM

Well Kash,.. it can even mean that in american slan,, there's a song Called "devil dutch dust", and they use that word,, IZZAT.. as, ""is that"" lol.. not ""Isn't it"".. but, it also refers to the concept of honor prevalent in the culture of North India and Pakistan... But, i went ahead and used it as an honor meaning... thank you... always..p.d.

Joseph Osita

Date: 11/18/2011 10:55:00 AM

Nice one, Kash

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/17/2011 10:16:00 PM

Cute lil hen....I bet he kept those eggs warm..the one that are cookin that is. Another fun scene...u are getting expert...hope u fixed the syllable count. It's always the little things. ughh. :) Gwendolen ps..I met some Bengalis at the department store when my son and I were shopping this evening. They were sooo nice.

Kash Poet

Date: 11/17/2011 9:32:00 PM

Yeah that will be better,thanx Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 9:06:00 PM

Kash, this is WONDERFUL, but one small problem. Middle line is 8 syllables: peep/ing/ through/the/kitch/en/ win/dow. Hey, I know. Why don't you say: peeps through the kitchen window? That will work just as well! I hope this scores high. I have one to post too, but not sure if I like it as much as yours!

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/17/2011 8:29:00 PM

What a horrific sight for the poor mother hen! Good one, Kash. Kim

Nancy Jones

Date: 11/17/2011 8:20:00 PM

oh, man, would love to comment but would be a little dicey for soup standards, beauty to ya, kash, namaste~N