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Help Family, Help Family

Help Family, Help Family Work hard coz I want real Money so I can help my mummy coz mummy help me when I didn’t have money.. And mummy was the one who told me ‘‘SAVE for a rainy day’’.. So now I got a double umbrella so if it rains it doesn’t poor, coz its not about being poor in Today’s times coz they don’t help the poor and its so much harder to help yourself.. So I help Mummy and not only with money so mummy can help herself, Daddy, Sis and Bro. So Daddy can help himself, Mummy, Sis and Bro. So Sis and Bro can help themselves, Mum, Dad and Me. So help your Family help Family because you’re a ……!!!!! By Tallan J Bent 23:23Hrs 17/05/08.

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Date: 1/1/2009 8:00:00 AM
Very cute verse with a profound message.Congrats on being featured.
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Date: 12/29/2008 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Warmest wishes for a safe and happy new year! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/29/2008 9:19:00 AM
Tallan - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – I hope the coming year has many blessings in store for you and those you love – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/28/2008 6:58:00 PM
Very clever write here Tallan and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week here at the Soup!! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2008 4:49:00 PM
Congrats Tallan on your lyric being featured. Vince
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Date: 12/28/2008 4:35:00 PM
The interesting use of language to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 12/28/2008 3:44:00 PM
Helping is the right thing, as much as we can. Well deserved poem to be featured this week! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/27/2008 2:38:00 AM
A great poem, well put together, we need to help our family, especially if we are in the position too. good work
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Date: 9/18/2008 3:11:00 PM
I like the message in this poem of family helping family. The theme is right on target. I like your point about saving for a rainy day. That's excellent. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/8/2008 5:41:00 AM
I reckon the truth in this poem is a truth that desperately needs to be heard - God Bless
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