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Heat...No Heat

Backyard swimming pool was a cooling treat haven, lonely under clouds...

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2010 3:50:00 PM

Mine has been lonely also except for the Cliff Swallows that have just loved swooping down and drinking the cool pure water..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this evening..I was gifted to have you choose one of mine to read today..Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/19/2010 7:44:00 AM

:) you got that right. Since it is the summer, pools are not lonely. Well written Senryu, Jay. Thanks for your comments on my poem today. Caroline.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/18/2010 3:29:00 PM

Beautifully written, Jay. You're making me miss the pool I had before I moved to my father's house. Now I have to swim in the ocean, but fresh water is far more appealing. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/18/2010 10:23:00 AM

What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Jay. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol