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''Heartbroken''

My heart brims with tears, for those that are dead and gone, beneath the dried up flowers, deep within the ground. A tangled tree is their shade, listen to the robin's call! __________________ April 22, 2014 Poetry/Choka/''Heartbroken'' Copyright Protected, ID 04-561-706-22 All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Any Poem Goes Sponsor, PD, Judged 05/2014 First Place

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John Loving Iii

Date: 4/28/2014 2:58:00 PM

congrads for this haunting piece. the robin puts things in perspective. john

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2014 2:52:00 PM

Thank you John

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/27/2014 11:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win.Good job :)

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2014 3:05:00 PM

Thank you Casarah

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/27/2014 10:51:00 PM

Congratulations on the fine win with this lovely write, Constance

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2014 3:12:00 PM

Thank you Ram

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/27/2014 6:23:00 PM

very sad but great win. Congratulations. Love Joyce

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2014 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Joyce

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/27/2014 4:49:00 PM

simple melancholic write.. CONGRATULATIONS ON THE WIN.. :), OLIVE ELOISA HERE.. :) GOD BLESS.. :

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2014 3:25:00 PM

Thank you Olive

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2014 1:43:00 PM

Hello Broken, Congratulations, I posted a fun blog for all my winning poems. Stop by and enjoy IF YOU LIKE. Just in case you don't know which blog belongs to this particular contest. Here's the link, http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=22228&PoetID=18720 Drop by and leave a smile. Hugs ~LINDA~

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2014 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Linda

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 4/27/2014 12:12:00 PM

Very Beautiful Constance... Congratulations on the win... Verlena

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2014 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Verlena

Jack Horne

Date: 4/24/2014 2:53:00 PM

this is just beautiful, Constance. So heartfelt and tender. Hope you and the kitties are well. Joe had his nails clipped earlier this week - he pecked the vet and the nurse! The vet thinks he needs to go on a diet (she said he was the biggest canary she'd ever seen, LOL). Have a wonderful week, my friend x

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2014 3:37:00 PM

Thank you Jack, Yes Joe needs a diet, I have seen his picture, He is the fattest canary I have ever seen!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/23/2014 7:37:00 AM

Very touchy , Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2014 3:38:00 PM

Thanks Ram