Sara Kendrick Poet Concrete

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Heartbreak

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                                   L  o  n  e  l  y                        
                     
                Tears                                    Pain
              
             Sobbing                                    break
            
          Chest                                           heart
     
      Ache
  
     Heart
 
     Changes                ____
  
   Physical                       \

    Evidence                        ____
     
      Of                                      \
       
        A                                         ____
  
         Broken                                    \

           Heart                                        __

              Seen                                            \

                    On

                        Echocardiogram

                              Takotsubo
                                               
                                      C a r d i o m y o p a t h y

                                                                        Lover's death

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Michael Ainsley September 20, 2016 at 1:31 AM I understand the pain and the depression that kills,but I like to be leave that the heart rather than breaking,deepens with experience and increases it's potential to love and be loved. Sara Kendrick September 20, 2016 at 6:17 AM Michael, it is a fact that some people do actually have physical proof that their heart it breaking and some do die from it believe it or not..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Jan Allison September 15, 2016 at 5:11 PM wow what a creative poem - I have heard of people dying from a broken heart especially the elderly who cannot cope without their lifelong partner:-( hugs Jan xx Sara Kendrick September 16, 2016 at 4:26 PM Thanks for the lovely comment..Now you know that a broken heart is a true happening..Most people heal in a couple of weeks but for some it is the end..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2016 at 4:15 AM - I agree with the comments by Daniel - As a nurse I have experienced it many times .... they die of grief - A great poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner September 6, 2016 at 8:22 PM It's not that hard to believe. You always hear of one spouse dying, after many years of marriage, and the other dying soon thereafter. People will say, they died of a broken heart. I did enjoy the creativity and am always fascinated by science:)

Ronald Kent September 6, 2016 at 8:13 PM Enjoyed what you bible with this one.

CayCay Godwin September 6, 2016 at 7:55 PM Well done! Great creativity, Sara ... CayCay

Sara Kendrick September 6, 2016 at 5:32 PM I was reading some items on the internet one day and found an article about how that heartbreak can actually kill a person but usually it is short lived and most recover but it is a real thing..Start reading with the word heart and go backwards and down..Sara