Heartbreak

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. L o n e l y Tears Pain Sobbing break Chest heart Ache Heart Changes ____ Physical \ Evidence ____ Of \ A ____ Broken \ Heart __ Seen \ On Echocardiogram Takotsubo C a r d i o m y o p a t h y Lover's death

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Michael Ainsley

Date: 9/20/2016 1:31:00 AM

I understand the pain and the depression that kills,but I like to be leave that the heart rather than breaking,deepens with experience and increases it's potential to love and be loved.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/20/2016 6:17:00 AM

Michael, it is a fact that some people do actually have physical proof that their heart it breaking and some do die from it believe it or not..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2016 5:11:00 PM

wow what a creative poem - I have heard of people dying from a broken heart especially the elderly who cannot cope without their lifelong partner:-( hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/16/2016 4:26:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment..Now you know that a broken heart is a true happening..Most people heal in a couple of weeks but for some it is the end..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2016 4:15:00 AM

- I agree with the comments by Daniel - As a nurse I have experienced it many times .... they die of grief - A great poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/6/2016 8:22:00 PM

It's not that hard to believe. You always hear of one spouse dying, after many years of marriage, and the other dying soon thereafter. People will say, they died of a broken heart. I did enjoy the creativity and am always fascinated by science:)

Ronald Kent

Date: 9/6/2016 8:13:00 PM

Enjoyed what you bible with this one.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/6/2016 7:55:00 PM

Well done! Great creativity, Sara ... CayCay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2016 5:32:00 PM

I was reading some items on the internet one day and found an article about how that heartbreak can actually kill a person but usually it is short lived and most recover but it is a real thing..Start reading with the word heart and go backwards and down..Sara