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Heart Song 2-23-10

Sometimes you make it so hard to breathe, the tears start to flow again and yet i can still see, but your all that comes to my mind, the look in your eyes, flooding my vision, drowning my smell, my heart beats faster and if i were to compell, my heart would sing in rejoyce as long as i had you, stealing with your words and kisses my voice, and ill lay and croon so softly the words i love you, your arms wrap around me and my breathing slows, calming me from my panick, letting me know, that your here with me, we're in this together, and that you promise me, that youll love me forever, daddy threatened to take you away, baby, my love, what do you say? you tell me that we'll be fine, we'll make it through one day at a time, you make me feel strong, like it will all get better, my faith is in you, and my heart wont grow heavier, one day soon our lips will meet again, and we'll be together till the end, we'll make this work, we have to try, and if we fail, my love wont die, for you my love will always be real, it will live forever, and be solid as steel, strong as dimonds, smooth as river rocks, our love will live forever more in our hearts, they wont stop us, though they can try, we'll take it slow, our love might hide, but it will always be there, and will always live on, forever more, in our hearts song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/29/2010 1:31:00 PM
Your words just flow, there is such an incredible cadence, it's like a dance...like a dancing of swans.
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:12:00 AM
aww rain this is a little bit of everything! sad because your dad says you cant see him anymore (sorry to hear that too) passionate in the begining and a profession to always love him at the end, it was beautiful! Jo
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Date: 2/24/2010 9:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Rain. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2010 6:03:00 PM
Great write, Rain. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work. ....Jimmy
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Date: 2/23/2010 1:05:00 PM
truly a heart SONG. Keep raining down your poems, sweet Rain! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/23/2010 11:31:00 AM
Wonderful poem my friend.... Excellent....:JP]
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