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~Hear The Call~ (Free Flow Verse Style ) Dreams of doom fills me quick, Overshadows my whole being And thoughts as dark come to be, With impending doom I can hardly see I feel so tired, weary All of sudden feel heavier on my feet... Nothing to hold me, I can't take another step, His evil presence blinds my way I'm falling into a darker endless hole, And a fear like none other raises over me, Where undead horrifying faces my heart grips... He overpowers me and his dark riders creeped on me The precious he wants from me at all cost And the ring bids me now , strongly, to do his master's will! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2004 June.29.2016 Authors notes: -From Frodo's point of view at the Prancing Pony Inn. Frodo's about to slip into darkness... -From my extensive poetry collection, inspired by the LOTR trilogy and the Hobbit books and all the movies and books by J. R. R. Tolkien-

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