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Heady Charm of a Wind

Layering stroke by stroke the syllables of filtered mist's breath, eastern winds spin like a circle of tropical fish and flower beds on a lattice... and the soft tresses of this air pours on wayfarers sort of crystal beads new. Then another circle whistles inside my flesh, a sponge... an oasis, bathing loin towel of morn dawning; how its flavor speaks and lifts trinkets of jeweled drops to lightly swirl away.... mid way. Wind Contest: SKAT's 8/29/2015

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Date: 9/1/2015 5:04:00 PM
Your charming wind playfully teases the senses as it twirls around, Nette! Love the imagery! ~ Congratulations on this merited win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/1/2015 12:54:00 AM
Congrats on ur fabulous winning write nette!
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Date: 8/31/2015 10:43:00 AM
Such exquisite imagery, Nette! One can feel the movement with your flowing words of imagery. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:05:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 8/29/2015 11:56:00 AM
Sweet sensations and imagery in this lighthearted write, Nette. All the best. huggs!
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Date: 8/28/2015 6:35:00 PM
Your poem has a heady charm about it Nette. I think i could stand in your garden and really enjoy the feeling you've achieved in this write, quite real. Take care, Richard oh just noticed the validation code BMY balmy, very fitting lol
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Date: 8/28/2015 5:44:00 PM
This is pure delight, Nette. I just love the imagery even till that brighter touch of a rhapsody at the very end!
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Date: 8/28/2015 3:58:00 PM
I like the way your mind works as it uses words that not only convey a thought but describe the ambiance of life around you,your first four lines are like a door opening up to another world inviting the reader in..good luck..this should do well
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Date: 8/28/2015 2:19:00 PM
- A glance into the beauty, dear Nette :) - I wish you good luck in the contest .... and a relaxed beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/28/2015 2:04:00 PM
Wow, I really feel the talent shining through here and it's really is a marvelous piece of emotion , only beautiful heart so connected with nature could have written this!
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