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He walks alone - 5 minute contest

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He walks alone - 5 minute contest

He plays guitar and flute
Walking the streets alone
Asking, looking always on alert
Looking for his son

Every street in every town
Every boy that  passes by
He looks to see if its Owen
Taken by his wife he knows not why

Contest. 5 minute challenge

Penned . 13 May 2013





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  1. Date: 5/17/2013 9:45:00 AM
    oh this reminds me of the movie about a boy who is searching for his parents. Kind of the opposite of what you have here, a parent looking for a child, and the movie involved music. I think it was August Rush, something like that. GOOD one in five min!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/17/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    sounds a good movie, I havent seen it, lol will have to tell me how to end my poem....Seren
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 9:40:00 AM
    Hi sass how's the leg? this is a strange one I must look up the contest looks interesting .xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/17/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    knee coming along very well Mandy, on just 1 stick already, the physio was astounded that I was only 2 weeks post op. Thanks for the comment Seren
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 8:05:00 PM
    I like your poem Seren, xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/14/2013 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rose, was strange writing part of a poem will hve to sort out an ending now ...Seren