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Do paths and rooms have memories of our being, and think of us as time has passed on by? Do voices echo still in empty houses, and soft in bittersweet refrain reply? I think these streets know of our being then, twisting to music flowing from screen doors, the days of nickel candy bars and dreams, and baby’s hands and knees on hardwood floors. This neighborhood became a sordid sewer. Laughter was soon killed by drugs and crime. Nostalgic are the days when fears were fewer and nothing was as sweet as summertime. A weeping willow once waved in the yard. Now gone a naked trunk’s remembering, the man, the woman and the little girls, from Sixties' years of Kennedy and King. 11/15/16

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Date: 7/5/2019 4:44:00 PM
I love the way you have written this nostalgic poem Janis! It is outstanding and going into my faves! Congratulations on your very deserving First Placement! xxoo : )
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Date: 7/7/2019 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Connie. I deeply appreciate the comments and the Fave. You are a true souper friend. Love and hugs, Janis.
Date: 7/5/2019 10:45:00 AM
This made me wonder of the same thing of places in my past. Well penned! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/7/2019 9:33:00 PM
Thank and blessings Jeanne.
Date: 12/8/2016 4:15:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on your placement in my contest, well done, I like the image also ~
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Date: 12/9/2016 4:45:00 PM
Thanks. Great contest, Constance. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 12/7/2016 11:46:00 AM
Coming back to you with congratulations :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/7/2016 7:09:00 PM
Thanks, Darren.
Date: 12/3/2016 8:42:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem, I hope it gets recognition this time... Good Luck in the contest :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/4/2016 6:49:00 PM
I am so happy that you like it. Thanks.

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