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#WestfieldMarion You’re trying to seduce me with your bright lights and shiny floors your promises of an abundance of ingredients for my happy forever-mores. But leave the children be like that little girl holding Mother’s hands in her LED lit shoes that squeak as she skips beaming with delight beneath the neon brands. For you’ve played your part in my history helping to shape my past and present futures you gave me Herbie my driver’s licence my enduring career these magnificent wings the endless frontiers. But I will not be seduced I will remain resolute immune to your charms even as you play my sentimentalities presenting long lost friends presenting past passionate lovers I shall not succumb I’ll… oh. mmm, what magnificent scented balms…

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Date: 9/21/2015 7:26:00 PM
you get better & better all the time! Light & Love
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Date: 8/23/2015 6:42:00 AM
...hahaha...with all the pronouncements, still a softie at heart...good one!
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:28:00 PM
Damn, I always do this...Forgot the Damn 7! :) john
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:28:00 PM
Damn, I always do this...Forgot the Damn 7! :) john
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:26:00 PM
Superb!! This is one of the best poems I have read for a long time. Loved it...A definite 7! My very best regards, Scott. :) john
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Date: 8/2/2015 8:47:00 AM
First rate and charming piece, the ending reveals we all have our price methinks.. I give this one a most definite 7 . A true pleasure to read this fine morn.
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Date: 7/31/2015 4:54:00 PM
Very charming & playful piece! The embrace of innocence within these memories are very resounding. I enjoyed this one! :)
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Date: 7/30/2015 3:45:00 PM
I love this,Scott.THANK goodness you have up a new one and that it is a GREAT poem! I too am so loyal to my hometown. It's so interesting how even the weirdest little town, people will treasure it in the memories forever.
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Date: 7/30/2015 6:45:00 AM
sounds like its just a matter of time till you give in...cute
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Date: 7/30/2015 9:10:00 AM
it wouldn't be the first time.

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