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Harvesting of Gems

Deep water divers collect slowly cultured gems, pearls from dark waters...

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/25/2011 7:02:00 AM

Nice visual poem Jay . AWESOME. Phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2011 11:50:00 PM

This one is really cool. A gem! LUv, Andrea

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/23/2011 3:35:00 PM

a beauty here..well done. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/23/2011 8:09:00 AM

Lovely imagery Jay in this gem filled Haiku penned so beautifully.. enjoyed the view this happy Sunday with luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/23/2011 8:00:00 AM

oh my... just heavenly, jay! i'm a 'ku lover and this enthrall me..:) hope you enter this in a contest!! :) do you speak filipino?? huggs, nette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 7:02:00 AM

Good morning, Jay the adventures one dives in to, just to meet the beauty under the seas.. A sweet and vivid image from your awesome Haiku.. enjoyed your poem,..Linda

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/23/2011 5:49:00 AM

There is wonderful surface imagery here of the pearl dives, Jay, but I can feel the spiritual quality of your haiku as well. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/23/2011 5:41:00 AM

Wonderful images you have penned in thgis haiku, jay