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Happy Birthday, Debs

Emailing cake is hard to do, And so I wrote a verse for you. I hope your day is filled with fun; A happy time with lots of sun. I hope you will accept from me A cyber hug across the sea. For Deb’s birthday contest

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/1/2013 5:25:00 PM

nicely done Jack ,,,,, I'm sure Debbie liked it too ;} and you won, awesome for that, Happy New Year ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2012 1:43:00 PM

JACK, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/1/2012 9:46:00 PM

Now Jack, I mailed my daughter who was living in Bristol her Birthday cake... ended up more like an upside down cake, but it can be done. Great poem. Well done. Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2012 6:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jack. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/30/2012 10:57:00 PM

Many congrats Jack for this win.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/30/2012 10:24:00 PM

BIG CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND JACK FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/30/2012 1:50:00 PM

Big congrats Jack nithing like a cyber hug to get a girl going lol xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/30/2012 12:34:00 PM

Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Light & Love

Len Gasun

Date: 9/21/2012 5:15:00 AM

wow!!! so sweet and lovely birthday poem you've penned my dear Jack. i am sure Debs will love this!!! Thank you for stopping by and taking time to read, comment and congratulate me on my wins.Good luck and best wishes to you in all the contests, too!!! have a nice and grace-filled day! hugs:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/21/2012 2:11:00 AM

oh so cute Jack luv .. am sure Debbie will accept that hug and cake too .. winning wishes my friend .. will send email Friday .. Ron is too droopy-eyed from my dictating all the comments .. he is a good sport ..

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/20/2012 7:46:00 AM

aw... love this! so clever :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/20/2012 7:40:00 AM

brilliant jack, deb will just love this...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2012 9:22:00 PM

wow, this is ONE AWESOME LITTLE BIRTHDAY poem. I love it, Jack.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/19/2012 6:22:00 PM

This is soo much better than cake....a very touching birthday poem! Nicely done!!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/19/2012 3:23:00 PM

short and very sweet! nice poem!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2012 2:21:00 PM

Ahhh!..Reads like a winner ....Great quick thinking..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in the contest..That would be a very long armed person wouldn't it..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2012 12:36:00 PM

Cakes are not easy to send ..... But this greeting is perfect Jack. Very well written. Luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/19/2012 11:18:00 AM

Gosh I bet she will, you can send me one whenever but send it up north my friend. I am sure Deb will love it xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/19/2012 11:16:00 AM

This is such a tenderhearted write my friend! I know Debbie is honored to get this hug from you for her Birthday! You created a fabulous poem here Jack, the flow and rhythm are perfect, and the rhyme is right on time! Magnificent piece, Great Work!!