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Hapless, Helpless, Hopeless

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Hapless, Helpless, Hopeless

I'd like a chance of true romance
To dance across my loveless path
A seed in me to place- implant,
But I find it all a laugh!
In splendored lands to hold our hands,
While Beauty lies where Love will stand?
Ha! But in an instant, it feels so distant-
A Union to disband

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  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:02:00 AM
    Chan The Man This write allows us to feel the hope of love in your heart and the chance to be happy. Great job my friend Thanks for the awesome comment on my Life On Stage poem. Hugs

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    Date: 10/26/2013 9:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, sweet pea! Enjoyed reading your new poems this morning :)