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Hand In Hand

HAND IN HAND Hand in hand, Slowly we walked with smiling faces and Singing souls, Through the placid night under the silvery light of Majestic moon, Tenderly holding our precious dreams deep into The trebling for joy elated hearts. Devine melody, the noble words we gently Spoke, Delight to our lips, the burning kisses we Softly shared, Ecstasy to our enraptured spirits, the hope we Secretly shared: The dearest dream we ever had, That one day, my love, We would, forever and ever, be ONE! © Demetrios Trifiatis 22 APRIL 2013

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Bozhidar Pangelov

Date: 5/4/2013 12:15:00 AM

Mediterranean language (figurative, sensual) and (I think) philosophical finale of unity. Looking philosopher in poetry?

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/24/2013 10:35:00 AM

This is very romantic. I love the Magestic moon. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2013 12:53:00 PM

Ahhhh!! Romantic work..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for the visit..Sara

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/22/2013 2:34:00 PM

Very romantic indeed. I like the free verse form you have chosen for this. It just flows and the content is beautiful.

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 4/22/2013 2:04:00 PM

A beautiful poem Demetrios, very romantic..... Devine melody, the noble words we gently Spoke, Delight to our lips, the burning kisses we Softly shared,.......excellent lines indeed the whole poem is wonderful and in particular the second stanza. A great read thanks.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/22/2013 11:12:00 AM

Very romantic with a hope for happy.endimgs..lovely.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 9:39:00 AM

Demetrios, a nice and wonderful poem, marriage is sacred,... you have shared the best and tenderness moments of love's desire. A great and heartfelt ending.... always~ Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/22/2013 5:34:00 AM

- A beautiful poem that reminded me of a Swedish song, "We'll go through life hand in hand, you and I" - Have a lovely day Demetrios. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)