Hand In Hand

HAND IN HAND


Hand in hand,
Slowly we walked with smiling faces and
Singing souls,
Through the placid night under the silvery light of 
Majestic moon,  
Tenderly holding our precious dreams deep into
The trebling for joy elated hearts.

Devine melody, the noble words we gently
Spoke,
Delight to our lips, the burning kisses we
Softly shared,
Ecstasy to our enraptured spirits, the hope we
Secretly shared: 
The dearest dream we ever had,
That one day, my love, 
We would, forever and ever, be ONE!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
       22 APRIL 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 5/4/2013 12:15:00 AM
Mediterranean language (figurative, sensual) and (I think) philosophical finale of unity. Looking philosopher in poetry?
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Date: 4/24/2013 10:35:00 AM
This is very romantic. I love the Magestic moon. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 4/23/2013 12:53:00 PM
Ahhhh!! Romantic work..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 4/22/2013 2:34:00 PM
Very romantic indeed. I like the free verse form you have chosen for this. It just flows and the content is beautiful.
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Date: 4/22/2013 2:04:00 PM
A beautiful poem Demetrios, very romantic..... Devine melody, the noble words we gently Spoke, Delight to our lips, the burning kisses we Softly shared,.......excellent lines indeed the whole poem is wonderful and in particular the second stanza. A great read thanks.
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Date: 4/22/2013 11:12:00 AM
Very romantic with a hope for happy.endimgs..lovely.
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Date: 4/22/2013 9:39:00 AM
Demetrios, a nice and wonderful poem, marriage is sacred,... you have shared the best and tenderness moments of love's desire. A great and heartfelt ending.... always~ Linda
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Date: 4/22/2013 5:34:00 AM
- A beautiful poem that reminded me of a Swedish song, "We'll go through life hand in hand, you and I" - Have a lovely day Demetrios. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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