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Halloween Poem # 15....The Old Cemetery...For Paula's Challenge

I would cut through the old cemetery But this is Halloween night Don't want to wake anyone up That would really give me a fright! I've heard the place is haunted Don't want to take that chance So I will take the long way around In this special circumstance But looking over my shoulder I see a disturbing sight Bodies rising up from their graves Scuttling about in the moonlight And now they're coming after me I've got nowhere to run My short legs don't pump fast enough Wishing I had a gun Glancing back I hear them there They're moaning and screaming at me As I cut through the darkened plots I can barely even see Help me someone-they're lurching towards me I'm running as fast as I can When suddenly I find myself Right back where I began In front of the old cemetery again Where are those undead now? Hope they went back to their graves Phew! I saved myself somehow!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/16/2010 4:57:00 AM
wow a fright or two here but excellent words duncan
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Date: 10/15/2010 12:34:00 PM
You have quite an imagination, Deb! I enjoyed this very much, especially the way you built suspense as you ran from the "undead." (I doubt a gun could "kill" them since they're already dead.) You should be collaborating with Stephen King. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2010 12:08:00 PM
Really cool write Deb for the Halloween theme challenge .. enjoyed this tale of fright and fear and safe at the end line... this holiday never runs out of words to write for my friend.. u are keep all entertained luv.. happy weekend..
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