Haiku's In Love

Sea breeze honey breeze! The companionship with you, Always a candy... =========================== My shining apple, Juicy lips like raspberry, Please hold me, don't go... Charles melody (lightning ink) © January 5th, 2011.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2011 3:28:00 PM

AWWW, this is so sweet, Charles!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2011 3:49:00 PM

Good double Haiku..It also can be called a Choka..Very passionate work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 1/26/2011 6:30:00 AM

thanks so much, i give God the glory for i am only a choosing vessel...

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/21/2011 8:48:00 AM

Delightful Haikus, Charles.. Thanks for reading, "Soft Wind" and leaving those kind comments. I was soaring the day I wrote that so it came so effortlessly. : ) Always, Annalise

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/5/2011 9:48:00 AM

Food and candy now you have my interest. mom soup mail

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 1/5/2011 9:42:00 AM

Sweet

Constance La France

Date: 1/5/2011 8:49:00 AM

Lovely love " senryu's" Charles, a delight to read~~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/5/2011 6:00:00 AM

Passionate and juicy thoughts on love, Charles

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/5/2011 5:20:00 AM

YUMMY Lightening Ink... a true Haiku for Luv my friend... luv your comment on my blog.. your heart's pillow... what a lovely phrase.. maybe u could write a poem with these words... would be awesome Charles.. as only u can do .... let me know luv...Happy New Year!