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blood red and yellow stained glass f a l l trees are changing- maple spreads her cloak streams are slowing down burnt orange l e a v e s are floating- ducks swim in still pools and sadly birds sing their silk f e a t h e r s fluttering- wind picks up a leaf the squirrels busy scampering up g o l d e n trees- sky is azure blue _______________________ September 19, 2016 Poetry/Haiku/autumn Copyright Protected, ID 16-8310-99-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym For the contest, Autumn Haiku sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 9/22/2016 3:48:00 PM
Vivid, colorful imagery in your haiku, Constance! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings!
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:02:00 PM
Great one, BW. Congrats!
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Date: 9/21/2016 10:54:00 AM
Lovely BW, congratulations on your win...
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:18:00 AM
Congratulationsulation's on your awesome win!
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Date: 9/20/2016 8:54:00 PM
Beautiful, Broken Wings!
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Date: 9/20/2016 7:52:00 PM
Dropping back with big congrats.
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Date: 9/20/2016 6:21:00 PM
I love this imagery, Constance, Amazing that last line!!! Big congrats.
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Date: 9/20/2016 5:49:00 PM
Such lovely imagery of Autumn in your well-chosen words, Broken Wings, and your word placement scheme lends to the poetic dance! Congratulations on your First Place win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/20/2016 4:16:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2016 3:53:00 PM
Broken Wings- I have always loved when I read more than 1 haiku and this did it for me. Beautiful imagery and the layout is a perfect touch...congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/20/2016 8:55:00 AM
Good luck with the contest, this is very lovely...
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Date: 9/19/2016 2:43:00 PM
Beautiful set of Haiku. Good luck on the contest. Agnes
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Date: 9/19/2016 2:21:00 PM
lovely string of haiku good luck Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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