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- Haiku X 16 Kissing In the Rain -

Silver shiny, careful summer droplets Caresses and cool their naked sunburned bodies He kissed away all the drops Tenderness in his kiss The rainbow, sunshine, thunder and rain Covered her with his kiss 23.05.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Nudershada Cabanes
Date: 10/19/2013 3:06:00 AM
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so Beautiful. love it!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2013 3:40:00 AM
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- Thank you for your visit and comment my poem, N.C.! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Shanity Rain
Date: 9/2/2013 4:22:00 PM
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I love this ! little words , but stunning for the reader !
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2013 2:42:00 AM
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- It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Yvette!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 8/19/2013 10:07:00 AM
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Wow! Creative, this is.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2013 2:41:00 AM
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- It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Alozor Michael!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Orozco
Date: 6/14/2013 10:09:00 PM
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Wow your poetry is really beautiful.. - Edward
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/15/2013 1:54:00 AM
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- It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Edward !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/1/2013 2:28:00 PM
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Congrats on your winning work..I enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2013 5:44:00 AM
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- Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 5/29/2013 4:59:00 PM
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Congrats on your win. AO
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2013 1:22:00 AM
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- Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/29/2013 1:18:00 AM
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HI,,there sweetie, just dropping by to say congrats for your win.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/29/2013 1:19:00 AM
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- Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Donna Jones
Date: 5/28/2013 1:36:00 PM
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I really do love your haiku's Anne Lise ..congratulations
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 2:24:00 PM
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- Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/28/2013 10:45:00 AM
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Congratulation on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 10:54:00 AM
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- Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 5/28/2013 10:01:00 AM
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Congratulations on win my friend Anne Lise...Have a blessed day always!! hugs, maria
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 10:15:00 AM
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- Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 5/28/2013 7:40:00 AM
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congrats on your win Anne
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 9:02:00 AM
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/28/2013 6:13:00 AM
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Congratulations
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 9:01:00 AM
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- Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 5/28/2013 4:34:00 AM
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This was beautiful-- loved the first stanza it gave me 'goose-bumps'. Wished I were that girl :) xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 9:02:00 AM
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- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
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Noel Villarosa
Date: 5/28/2013 2:36:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win, Anne Lise. Nice entry. Thanks also. (^_^) Noel.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 2:43:00 AM
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Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:19:00 PM
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Anne. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 1:50:00 AM
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- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Linda. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:19:00 PM
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sorry about the syllable count... however... enjoyed the plot of your verse... xox
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Douglas Fulghum
Date: 5/27/2013 7:00:00 PM
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Delicious, very nice Anne Lise. Good Luck on the contest. Loved it. Douglas
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 1:50:00 AM
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 5/27/2013 7:22:00 AM
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hmmmm....Please don't disturb them hahaha have a cool/romantic day my dear Anne Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/27/2013 10:07:00 AM
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- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/26/2013 1:01:00 PM
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Words that spills out sensuality. Beautifully done and great metaphors. Best wishes in the contest. It should place very high I would think. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/26/2013 1:03:00 PM
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/26/2013 12:30:00 AM
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Nice and romantic, sweetie.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/26/2013 2:45:00 AM
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 5/24/2013 11:22:00 PM
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Woo wi, don't know if I want to interrupt them. Very sensual, Anne-Lise :) Have a great weekend, my friend!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/25/2013 1:56:00 AM
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- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Toquyen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 5/24/2013 4:56:00 PM
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Rainfall and lovers. always good stuff.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/25/2013 1:56:00 AM
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/24/2013 11:14:00 AM
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Lovely xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2013 11:18:00 AM
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- Thanks for the nice visit, really appreciate your comments, Mandy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 5/24/2013 11:01:00 AM
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so sensual and romantic Anne... A wonderful write....Thank you for your kind words....hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2013 11:03:00 AM
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Poet Tacito
Date: 5/24/2013 8:01:00 AM
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Sensuality's simple pleasures. The way it should be. An embrace of the sun & rain...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2013 8:57:00 AM
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- Thanks for the nice visit, really appreciate your comments, Drake. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Elai Cee
Date: 5/24/2013 6:40:00 AM
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lol a love story starts with a magical kiss.---love this---ELAI
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2013 6:59:00 AM
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- Thanks for the nice visit, really appreciate your comments, Elai. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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