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Haiku - Bees

bees working very hard pollenating their surrounds flora bows in joy

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Date: 12/20/2023 7:47:00 AM
Ah, the back-scratching begins, the buddy system, the money market a/c opens deposits made interest earned--the cycle that perpetuates purpose of presence via co-existentialism. Yes, Shadow, your Haiku cast a light on defining the reasons 'to be.' Your 'Moon' Haiku has more than one for me to exact upon, albeit, a Souper et al. bears interest. Be this a good day, my friend, Aloha, William
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/20/2023 10:01:00 AM
ty William good to hear from you glad you liked it hugs Shadow
Date: 12/25/2016 1:19:00 PM
I love bees. Nice haiku. Merry Christmas, Shadow.
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Date: 10/11/2016 1:25:00 AM
A lovely Haiku Shadow, I too can imagine the flowers delight /|\
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Date: 9/29/2016 8:50:00 PM
So cool to see you did your own bees poem here. Love that last line, Shadow.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/30/2016 4:25:00 AM
ty Andrea it was great to see you on my winners list with your very good acrostic hugs

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